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Thursday, April 23, 2020

Teeth

Today we did some writing and it was pretty easy for me heres mine and i will put the link to the video down lower.




here it is

https://www.literacyshed.com/teeth.html

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3 comments:

  1. Mrs HansenApril 29, 2020 at 12:17 PM

    Hi Bailee, You have done a great job of re-telling what happened in the video.
    Mrs Hansen

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  2. UnknownApril 29, 2020 at 1:42 PM

    Hi Bailee. Well done with your re-telling of the story.
    Mrs Fanning

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  3. williamsongMay 1, 2020 at 2:14 PM

    Kia ora Bailee, thank you for sharing you writing. This is a funny story and you have done a good job of painting a picture in my mind with your descriptive language like 'still, calm river'. I notice there is a bit of confusion about whether you are writing in the past tense or the present tense. Maybe you could re-read and edit your writing so the tense is the same throughout the whole story.
    Miss Williamson

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