kia ora, my name is Bailee is this week we have been doing persuasive writing here is mine. what do you like about it?
do you think kids should have a mobile phone?
do you agree or disagree?
Thursday, August 27, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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hi bailee I like how you used strong paragraphs and backed up your sentences really well good job next time maybe use a bit more puncuation
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