The orangutan was frightened from the horrifying storm. The little orangutan was making shelter so he does not get wet. The rain sounds like
drum sticks drumming on the drum. The clouds are taking over the rain and the clouds look like smoke coming out of a chimney. The orangutan is cold like a icicle. The lightning is as shiny as a metal car. The little orangutan is slipping off the green gooey stuff.
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I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McClelland. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Saturday, May 25, 2019
the little orangutan
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